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**You Don't Have To Be Jade To Comment on My Blog**

I haven't had mass comments on the blog about this (just 2 so far), but hey people I don't expect you to be Jade to comment on my blog no matter what you might have to say about the poems. I figured I'd post this blog entry before I have a slew of people letting me know they aren't Jade. I'm happy with anyone providing input, including suggestions for improvement. If you are reading this and have no idea what I'm going on about, then I'd explain it all to you, but the mysteries in life are what make it worth living.

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Anonymous said…
.there is no mystery so great as misery.
January 17, 2008 at 12:38 PM
Miraenda said…
I'd sing the sorrow for the misery of life, but my voice is so bad that it would be totally off key.
January 17, 2008 at 1:07 PM
Anonymous said…
I'd tell stories that everyone wants to hear, of joy, with happy endings. But I'd be too afraid my mind would wander to reality.

If you end up joining p&q, let me know and I'll show you the ropes.
Haha =]

I'm liking the new stuff you put up, I'll post another comment with some critique or something you may find helpful.
January 17, 2008 at 7:34 PM
Cee said…
Lol, I'm apart of the 'mass'. I feel somewhat special.

The mysteries of life will never be solved, so long as humans are humans-- there is so much we are incapable of. The Neanderthals had all the answers.
January 18, 2008 at 7:02 PM
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