I haven't had mass comments on the blog about this (just 2 so far), but hey people I don't expect you to be Jade to comment on my blog no matter what you might have to say about the poems. I figured I'd post this blog entry before I have a slew of people letting me know they aren't Jade. I'm happy with anyone providing input, including suggestions for improvement. If you are reading this and have no idea what I'm going on about, then I'd explain it all to you, but the mysteries in life are what make it worth living.
old and new, I’m here waiting for you over the hills and under the sun waiting for you as life has begun waiting for you as long as we’ll be waiting for you as you waited for me again we go together my friend through these woods as deep as our sorrows we’ll travel this way into each day through mountains and glens til tomorrow gilded and golden, sapling in green dusty and dark, light with a spark colors abound throughout our journey filling our hearts at all we’ve seen making us age at every stage we’ve dreamed all of life's majesty in the oceans and ponds and what lies beyond footsteps echoing on the hard ground voices fading out til they have no sound we arrive here where we started before each of us the same yet now we've changed one of us lives and cries and cries the other lies down in this cold ground and closes her eyes dusty and dark, light with a spark we’ll travel this way into each day through mountains and glens til tomorrow
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I'm liking the new stuff you put up, I'll post another comment with some critique or something you may find helpful.
The mysteries of life will never be solved, so long as humans are humans-- there is so much we are incapable of. The Neanderthals had all the answers.